Logline Creation
$50.00
I will craft a logline for you that hooks your audience and gets people interested in your story.
Whether you’re pitching to producers, investors, agents, or festival programmers, a strong, engaging logline is the first step toward making them want more.
With my professional logline service, I don’t just tweak words—I dig deep into your story to craft a logline that highlights the heart of your narrative, the stakes, and the unique hook that sets it apart.
What You Get:
- 100% Human-Written Logline
- By Multiple Award-Winning Film Producer Dawn Fields
- Based on Your Full Script, Treatment, or One-Pager
- Tailored to Your Story’s Core Conflict & Stakes
- Designed to Hook Readers, Executives & Investors
- Refined for Clarity, Precision & Engagement
- TWO Revisions
- SAME DAY Turnaround
Your story deserves a logline that captivates. Let me craft yours today!
Logline Before & Afters
Comedy
“A quirky barista tries to navigate dating while dealing with their eccentric coworkers.”
Problems:
- No clear goal
- No real conflict
- No stakes
Improved:
“A hopeless romantic barista bets her cynical best friend that she can find true love before Valentine’s Day—but every terrible date brings her closer to losing both the bet and her faith in love.”
Protagonist with a goal (hopeless romantic)
Conflict (find true love vs. terrible dates)
Stakes (losing the bet and her faith in love)
Horror
“When a group of friends visits an abandoned asylum, they start disappearing one by one as an ancient evil awakens, forcing them to confront their deepest fears while also uncovering a long-buried town secret.”
Problems:
- Cliché setup
- Too much happening
- No central focus
Improved:
“When a skeptical journalist joins a viral ghost-hunting challenge inside an abandoned asylum, she must unravel the truth behind the legend—or become its next victim.”
Unique angle (journalist, not generic friend group)
Clear protagonist & goal (she must find the truth)
High stakes & urgency (her life is at risk)
Drama
“A man struggles with his past while trying to reconnect with his daughter.”
Problems:
- No clear protagonist
- Vague conflict
- No stakes or urgency
Improved:
“Haunted by the tragic accident that tore his family apart, a reclusive musician must reconnect with his estranged daughter before she leaves for college—or risk losing her forever.”
Protagonist (reclusive musician)
Conflict (reconnect with daughter)
Stakes & urgency (if he fails, she’s gone for good)