A tough-love workshop that helps you ditch rambling and over-explaining—so you can pitch, negotiate, and write with confidence and clarity to get the results you want.
WHAT WE’LL COVER…
EMAILS
The average person spends just 10 seconds deciding whether to keep reading your email—or delete it.
*Learn to write short, punchy emails that hook attention fast—so your message gets read, not ignored. Â
PITCHING
Most decision-makers know within 60 seconds if they’re interested—or if they’re mentally checking out.Â
*Learn to master the ‘quick pitch’ which will help you explain your pitch with clarity and passion.
PITCH DECKS
Investors spend about 250Â seconds viewing a deck. 50% of that time is spent on just the first two slides.
*Condensing you story/idea into small bites with compelling images is key here.
NEGOTIATIONS
Most negotiations fail due to both sides not explaining their position well nor truly understanding the other party.
*Learn to really listen to the other party while also being clear, confident and concise in your ask. Know when to stop talking.Â
STORYTELLING
75% of customers believe that brands should use storytelling in their marketing and 92% of them want brands to create ads that feel like stories.
* Opening with a compelling hook and then telling your story in an easy-to-follow, digestible way wins every time.
JOBS
86% of executives cite ineffective communication for workplace failures. 40% of bosses say a candidate losing focus or rambling is one of the top reasons they fail job interviews.
*Learn to control your nerves and answer questions with clarity ease and confidence.Â
Artificial Intelligence can’t save you.
Lengthy emails may be killing your opportunities.
People are tuning out your long-winded pitch.
Poor communication is killing that deal.
What will save you?
Learning how to say less—and mean more. And honing it with practice.
READY TO FINALLY GET MORE?
Join me for Getting To The Point, the workshop designed to help talkers become closers.
REGISTER NOW!
ABOUT THE HOST
DAWN FIELDS
Dawn Fields is a creative business consultant who helps professionals, creatives, and entrepreneurs sharpen their messaging, improve communication, and develop smarter strategies to achieve their goals.
With 25+ years in the entertainment industry, Dawn combines storytelling expertise and creative leadership with real-world problem-solving to help clients think strategically, communicate effectively, and lead with confidence.
Whether you’re crafting a pitch, writing a crucial email, or restructuring your workflow, Dawn provides the clarity and direction you need to move forward with purpose.
Companies Work For
MOVIE & TV SERVICES
Clarity is everything. A strong logline grabs attention. A polished pitch deck makes your project stand out. A clear query letter opens doors. Honest script feedback helps you refine your work before it reaches the right hands.
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